Try adding some more design to it. And I notied hat theres an "I" in the title, instead of making a ton of mini levels, you should try to make more longer levels that include more then a few sentances of the plot.
Try adding some more design to it. And I notied hat theres an "I" in the title, instead of making a ton of mini levels, you should try to make more longer levels that include more then a few sentances of the plot.