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Topic, Level "Classical Boredom!", game "Jump Gear 2" | ||||||
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You must register or log in to post a message.Let the HSF begin. You did nice effort Niimporta... Isn't it better like that ;) Just try to get a better title. Avoid using exclamation marks. When you use a design, try to develop it to make sense ;) You could have develop those volcano/pothole/candle concepts 2: There was an error in the long line in the hill So i did it so you didn't see it. I'm almost done... For me, what this level miss most is a meaning... Why those candles? Why this volcano? You also use some random design (with green lines) There is also too much messy spot. In the background AND in the gameplay... I put some red crosses where I want you to clean and some question marks on useless or weird design. Btw there is some nice things here. And I have no problem with those stars. I like stars :D 123 Stars has it meaning, they're candles at first, the one from the middle the most important one, then on the volcano it's lava. Anyways why shouldn't this level be accepted..? [edit Ferrari] Matthijs, can you please make your comments easier to understand? |