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gameinsky 13 years ago
  try to spend more time on your spelling, oh and design too.
coliveflower76 13 years ago
  ok thank you gameinsky (:. yay it looks like it's accepted now :D
gameinsky 13 years ago
  Stomped out all of the misspellings:
dision -> decision
oppotunities --> oportunities

your now --> you're now
brifiing --> briefing

ur --> your

sense --> since
Hovercraft

its --> it's
wasnt --> wasn't
attact --> attack

shouldn't of --> shouldn't have
Ill --> I'll
coliveflower76 13 years ago
  k thanks guys. I'll fix the spelling errors :P and im just gonna take out the scanning room cuz idk how to fix it :/. Why would i have to change his name? jw
gameinsky 13 years ago
  it verifies you're an agent <-- another misspelling found
wepon --> weapon
probley --> probably

if you were to fix what azz said and changed agent t's name (srsly, if it continues like that, it will be his real name D:)

I suggest you to use a spellingchecker before writing down your texts.
azz 13 years ago
  There is a problem.
The invisible lines could be neater and you are not forced to get the badge so when you go in the scanner and it says badge verified... you have no badge.
Other than that it's an OK level.
coliveflower76 13 years ago
  so i know its been like a year sense i've submitted this lol, but i've worked out a few kinks and fixed some stuff, so can someone please evealuate my level? i gusse lol thats how it works right? lol thanks :)
Creedsanatomy 14 years ago
  you should just cut this level in half and make a sequel cuz this is kinda laggy
gameinsky 14 years ago
  Thumbnail gotta be in testmode, grids don't show nice in thumbnails :(
Sillius 14 years ago
  If you (or someone else) ever need help editing your levels you can check out the Sillius's Messyness Removal in the forum tab xD
coliveflower76 14 years ago
  haha thanks for trying lol
Creedsanatomy 14 years ago
  ill just edit the design ;o

um, ok.....
i really don't know how to add design to this level 'o.O
i fixed all your spelling errors :/
coliveflower76 14 years ago
  ok i addeed you to my editors, please help edit it but dont take anything out of it with out asking me first ok?
Creedsanatomy 14 years ago
  up at the top under "levels"(right under the word bonuslevel) click on your name. go to a level that you want someone to help you with, click (more) , click editors and add my name ;]
coliveflower76 14 years ago
  thanks how would you help? sorry i just dont get how the process works yet
Creedsanatomy 14 years ago
  i can help ;]
coliveflower76 14 years ago
  Hi I need help editing my level, because im not sure why its not getting accepted i dont know what to change, and im not sure how this works, so i just listen to what was told to me, and that was call for an admin. So please help? thanks
gameinsky 14 years ago
  Thumbnail is not updated yet ?
coliveflower76 14 years ago
  thanks for all the comments, i just realized you guys were commenting on MY level, and not sombody else's lol. Anyway yah its my first level well i did a diffrent one but it didnt get accepted. And thanks for the advice gameinsky, i fixed the spelling errors, but im not gonna worrie about the scanning room. But thanks every one :)
sajtoskiflee 14 years ago
  Is it your first lvl?
Sires 14 years ago
  Love that level. Hard to believe that it's your first. Excellent.
joe45 14 years ago
  I think the sign is funny because it is written in jibberish! :)
SimonM 14 years ago
  nice level
gamelover101 14 years ago
  I could help, if he needs it
gameinsky 14 years ago
  mission, chosen, desission, your job, weapon.
The scanning room doesn't look like a scanning room.
The scan should stop when done scanning.

Capitalise title, thumbnail in testmode while pressing shift please.

Aloud ---> allowed

gessu ---> guess
ur in ---> you're in
excepted ---> accepted
and few more misspellings.

If you don't care of those, it's a nice first level!

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gameinsky 14 years ago
  mission, chosen, desission, your job, weapon.
The scanning room doesn't look like a scanning room.
The scan should stop when done scanning.

Capitalise title, thumbnail in testmode while pressing shift please.

Aloud ---> allowed

gessu ---> guess
ur in ---> you're in
excepted ---> accepted
and few more misspellings.

If you don't care of those, it's a nice first level!
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