Topic, Level "A Whodunit", game "Rolling Turtle"

  yep i guessed it was gis lol

  R u stuck at some point? i can help.

  He might be PLAYING the PACK right now, and find all the levels hard. :/

  pack? this is a level, not a pack

  hard pack not fun

  Done. done.

  Need more checkpoints.

  First of all, the dot blocking is supposed to b a challenge,what about checkpoints missing?,I'll fix ground,line is also challenge

Also,is story ok?Even though your killer?

  You have many things to fix.
he line at the beginning kills you, the dot blocks your path etc.
Messy ground (not flat) checkpoints missing...