Topic, Level "Forbidden Land", game "Rolling Turtle"

  YES!i found it, I played this level YEARS ago before I got an account, and I finally found it!

  Yeah! Finally! XD

  It's been accepted. xP

  I getting frustrated because I'm not sure what to change.

  That only happens if you die in the level, and there really isn't a place to die...

  At the top of the machine,i could find the info bubbles from the beginning.

  What do I still have to edit? 0_0

  Ok i'll put one in. Thanks!

  @Daft_Punk, it's okay if it's like it, I put the ":P" at the end to signal that it's not a serious comment, just an observation which I think is LOL-worthy. :/

  Putting an invisible line making it unable to go further.

  Ahroo: Sorry if it's like your level.
GIS: How should I fix the trap?

  After getting the star, you can jump over it to escape the trap.

  @MarioIsFireball, he isn't announcing it to his father. :|

Also, this looks *kinda* like "Rescue Your Friend!". :P

  Can't wait for part two... I love stories like that.

  It's I'm leaving! not I'm leaving

  I fixed the spaceship part, but I'm not sure what I'm supposed to fix now.

  Nice story, but there are flaws in this, what am I supposed to do at the spaceship ?
You can escape the trap easily.
gramatical errors i the introduction.