Topic, Level "The End's Story", game "Rolling Turtle"

  Just delete it. Just-just delete it.

  Got rid of some of the dialogue of the start.
I gotta list this for you: A dialogue that is boring and has no special things is not cool.
You had to see how a floating spirit tried to wake up a turtle, to many boring setnences, nothing special, really.OK
First time I actually had the patience to get to earth, I was not really pleasent.
No symetry in the canons unfortunately, Surprisingly almis base was prett cool, and the only decent part of the level, I liked it.
But I do not see any link between almis and the apocalypse on earth.

  Added two checkpoints.
Is that enough?

  Please be a little moar specific. Just a little hint.

  more checkpoints please.

  I sped it up from 5 to 10.

I also addded a little info at the end.

  No offense but the beginning is very boring and all the rides (things that take you to different places) are boring as well.

  cutscene messages can be faster...
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