Topic, Level "no story", game "Rolling Turtle"

  Oh... sorry i actually made this in the morning i think? i didnt work long on it didnt expect it to be discovered.... at... all.... but thanks for feedback. i probably wont fix it but instead make a remake of it. thanks for inspiration and contructive critisism, highly appreciated :3

  I like the design of the wave part in the beginning.

  Not half bad, actually... :/

Love the detail of gthe elevator slipping. :p

  I see you made a level level!
Nice first level, more advanced than the other newbie levels.
However... it has a few flaws.
Capitalise the title, taken the thumbnail in testmode while holding shift.
there is a moment you roll on a long line, well, it's kinda boring.
So shorten it please.
Then after the elevator there is that part with the big powerups, I always die here.
and perhaps a way so you don't jump over the elevator ?

Don't forget to comment when you changes are done.