Topic, Level "Secrets Galore!"

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chris3000 13 years ago

Nice design.

gameinsky 13 years ago

the level is called "newbies" just so you know.

nachos 13 years ago

the snake was messy and some other things

CamoDragoon 13 years ago

5/5 for first submitted level, nice job!

As GIS said, there are a lot of minor messiness issues, be sure to watch out for the next time. :)

Some examples were:

SPOILER

-many of your straight lines. A little-known fact by new players is that horizontal straight lines are only striaght if you draw them right-to-left. If you draw them left-to-right, you will notice (especially if you zoom in in the editor) that they really aren't straight. Look out for them. :)
-The pyramid. A LOT of lines were sticking out of the sides of the pyramid. Trust me, you don't want that. Try lowering the grid to size 8 to draw those lines, most of the time they should link both sides of the pyramid just fine. If you REALLY need a precision line, use grid size 4.
-conveyor looked a little weird. :)
-another big one: the ends of lines. If you make a line, click to finish it on the end of the line, and then click to finalize it on that same end again (sorry if that's hard to understand :) ), you'll create a bulge at the end of the line. This is especially obvious to players if it occurs in boxes. Be careful. :)

P.S. There is a messiness tutorial by Oh_Bebe that tells you all about what to avoid. :)
(It's in this game)

Nice level tho! I liked it. :)

Masquerade 13 years ago

Read comment below it is my first ACCEPTED level

Magic_X 13 years ago

The pyramid was a little messy, but all in all, fantastic first level! :D

Masquerade 13 years ago

Thanks this isn't my first level,I have like 40 more in local save XD

Edit: what was the little messy part?(did you get in the bonus room?)

gameinsky 13 years ago

You sir, are a GENIUS!
I felicitate you, you managed to make a level avoiding all basic errors.
There's a small degree of messyness but I'll let go for once, there's a lot of potential in you!

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