Topic, Level "Have A Ride", game "Rolling Turtle"

  No matter, it's not a good idea to edit a rejected level, start anew, I know you can do it.

  k but i updated this level

  A level isn't just a mix of lines, it's a mix of lines that form a theme. It's not hard to find one.
Leveldesigning tips & tricks
Check the section labelled as "How to find ideas?"

  dont get it

  no, just don't draw lines and see how it makes out, no, give your level a theme!

  so all i have to do is remove some hedgehogs?

  If you look at the top rated levels you see that they don't use a lot of hedgehogs...

  what do you mean with "Original level?"

  Much better than your previous level, but it's full of unoriginal challenges.
Please try to make a more original level.