Topic, Level "Speedy Run", game "Jump Gear 2"

  I am very suprised that this is a rejected :/
EDIT: read the comments xD

  We just keep it rejected until Samus get his own accepted level. ok?

If he don't create any level, just ask for a new evaluation and I'll accept it.

  I dont think that will make a difference.. Its rejected because of what Pof said.. Its not going to get accepted... :D

Could Samus or someone please remove me from being an editor :)

  Too short make it longer

  I don't think this level will be accepted...As Nachos did 90% of it, it would be better for Samus to do his first accepted level by himself.
Anyway, it is nice from you nachos to help beginners :)

  I am finished... I had to change the title because it had already been used :)

  I am almost done... Do you have anything you would like to add samus???

  I will edit it as soon as I can :)

  Not a good idea samus.
Watch how nachos improves it, and learn from him.

  i'll just make a new level while nachos is fixing up this level

  remove everything after the slow lines, replace it with better challenges, and it would become better.

  what i was thinking is a elevator going down to the sencond spot instead.
so then it isn't as messy

  Ok just add me as an editor go to your profile and click the "[more]" button right next to the level.. It will take you to a page.. Then all you have to do is type my username into the space underneath the word "editors".... :D

  thanks nachos i would like that

  If you would like some help on your level you could as me as an editor and I could help you make it acceptable :)

  If you upload a level you cannot save it locally anymore :/

I suggest you just start over with a new level. If you want your levels to be accepted it's always a nice thing to add some bg-design, but the best thing you could do is to play some top-rated levels, create a new level and then I'll give you some more feedback when I can see what you're able to learn just by playing levels :)

  ok I do know it's pretty messy and right after i uploaded it i remembered i didn't capitalize

what should i do to make it better though Ferrai12?

By the way, it won't let me local save it anymore

  I guess it's tougher for a new level to get accepted nowadays, than it were back when you were active last time. I'd recommend you to play some of the newer top rated levels. Also watch out for messyness and always remember to capitalize the first letter of the title and take the thumbnail whilst holding down SHIFT.

The lethal lines at the start do look really good, even though I cannot accept this level in its current form, unfortunately :/