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Topic, Level "Metalic Hsf", game "Jump Gear 2"

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Ferrari12 11 years ago
  Because it's rejected, and you can't rate rejected levels.
jake20056 11 years ago
  why wont it let me rate?
Ferrari12 11 years ago
  This is quite nice for a first level, but unfortunately it doesn't reach the desired quality standards. Here are some things which need to be improved on your future levels:

- You need to come up with a better concept, or alternativelt execute a mediocre concept in a n excellent way.
- You need to add some more design in your fututre levels. Though there are some design features in this level, they aren't providing enough visual treats.
- It is also recomended that you make your future levels a bit longer than this one.

However, this level isn't messy, and that's a really good thing, because neatness is the one thing new designers struggle the most with. The fact that you have added some design is also very good, because this is also somethng new designers rarely do. There is room for improvement here as well, but you're on your way, and that makes us all happy!

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Ferrari12 11 years ago
  This is quite nice for a first level, but unfortunately it doesn't reach the desired quality standards. Here are some things which need to be improved on your future levels:

- You need to come up with a better concept, or alternativelt execute a mediocre concept in a n excellent way.
- You need to add some more design in your fututre levels. Though there are some design features in this level, they aren't providing enough visual treats.
- It is also recomended that you make your future levels a bit longer than this one.

However, this level isn't messy, and that's a really good thing, because neatness is the one thing new designers struggle the most with. The fact that you have added some design is also very good, because this is also somethng new designers rarely do. There is room for improvement here as well, but you're on your way, and that makes us all happy!
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