Topic, Level "The Ferry", game "Jump Gear 2"

  How 40000????

  The ferry dont leaving in 5 minutes! In 1 because we just have 1 minute time to complete this level!

  so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  liverpool has a ferry so i like this level

  Sure , there are no copyrights on levels up here :)

  can i make my own version of this???

  what 'wow' ?

  wow

  Very good lvl!

  Okay thanks....

  I've edited your level in order you can see it was not so difficult to make something clean. Seeing this level in the editor, I realize how much you worked quick and dirty. There were unnecessary curves, paths everywhere, the swithces could be skipped etc...

I will never edit one of your level again, so next time, be more careful.

The level is still very poor, but it is acceptable.

  Aaaaah i see well i dont wanna make a new level now i hae used like 2 hours on making it then it should be edited and i edit it forget to save edit again and it gets rejected but if someone wants they can use this idea about the ferry i dont really care

  wich word do you see in the word 'thematic' ?
right!
theme!
he means that a level with that theme would be great
but not on this way

  Okay...
But couldnt it get accepted it has challenge no messy curves okay thumbnail i think and the title is okay too the only problem is it thematic which i dont know what means...

  Yep , I think it's better to give up on this one, and make another one. the thematic is good.
The landscape around a port (ferry) is very flat, I don't think you should have used challenges with platforms etc..., just a linear race to the port and the ferry.

  rejected?

  The loops are very annoying!

  Okay its done now

  Okay i have edited it a bit i made it very simple now maybe a bit boring and then i edited the switch of the ferry so its impossible to get if your too slow

Noo forgot to upload it! omg thats just annoying

  I dont understand it but i will try to edit what i think you mean

  No no no, I don't want a longer level. I want a level that is clean and simple. You've chosen a thematic, and that's good. So now, every curve, item you put on the map must have a link with this thematic.

And you have to be more careful with the execution. The curves ar enot very neat. You have to pay attention to the symetry, the smoothness etc...

  i'm not really sure but i think it's that he asked

  Well okay i will try to make it longer

  no he didn' asked to make a whole new level but to expand it

  Im not gonna edit it if i have to make a whole new level

  So i have to make a whole new level

  You have to start a new level from scratch. The thematic is a nice idea, try to design brilliant challenges and backgrounds on the same thematic, boats, time, hurry up, sea, travel etc...

  So i need to edit the ferry and what else? I have editet it a bit but i dont think i have done what you mean

  The execution is a little bit messy.

But more important, the level design is quite confused. I don't see the Ferry thematic in the first platforms.

By the way, (message to everybody reading this) don't forget it's racing game. The stars inside the Ferry are useless because you will get much more point if you hurry up to the finish line without taking the stars. Never forget that the stars are not a lot of points, they must be in (or not far from)the way of the car, to mean something.