Topic, Level "Quagmar Moons", game "Rolling Turtle"

  Level accepted!
One less without scores.

  yay I beat it =)

  Okay, I re-added the bubble, and now it feels more like space! I never should have removed it anyways.

I think I've fixed everything, I've decided to keep the islands as they are. You can accept it now.

  It needs some better option for jumping. I think it should have a bubble power-up so the jump height is enough to get you some vertical distance.

  Okay, speed quadrupled, jumping power doubled, and made it so you can't get stuck in cave-ins. I'll work more on it later.

  Yeah, what DD noted is right (other than the trapped part). That's partly why I said it feels "weird" without the bubble, because in order to ascend you have to sit there holding space bar while you bounce repeatedly. Also, crossing over hills without the bubble is rough, rather than rolling over you almost always have to move sideways slowly and keep jumping since the platform doesn't rise fast enough for you to move sideways quickly while jumping. I think it messes with the concept of the level being in space. I wish you the best of luck with this AK, it certainly has potential :)

  Alright. I'd say it still moves too slow. Goes for both moving speed, and jump gain. Messages could be faster and im not sure how but after 4 cans (again..) i ended up trapped in a small hole after a cave-in.

I like the idea of this, but there is still refinery to do. Keep it up :)

  Allright, say when you're done so I can accept.

  Actually, the fuel cans are in numerical order: Can 1 is to the left of Can 2, Can 4 is between Can 3 and Can 5, etc.

Also, I edited it so it is now impossible to fall off the invisible platform.

  Yeah, my computer didn't have lag when I played it yesterday. And yes some kind of hint would be an option, given the scale of the map it's easy to miss one (depends on how long you want the level to take though AK).

  Well, back when I evaluated it I had a much worse computer. It doesn't seem to lag on my current one but I don't know if anybody else might have lag.

I would recommend adding some kind of hint of where the cans are though.
Either in the form of a small minimap somewhere or arrows pointing in their direction.

  Alright, the cave now has rocks on the few inside structures, but none on the giant outside structure. How's the lag now?

I'll get to moving the other islands later this week.

  Also having just played this again, it's kind of weird without the bubble, albeit faster.

  I've set it to be edited.

A side note though, if you go through with these changes the scores will have to be reset.
[edit]
I just realised there's none, so I guess there's no consequences.

  Can I edit this? I'm going to redo the cave, as well as move things generally closer to each other.

  It's not too big, it's too laggy.

  No scores yet. ._.

Wow, that really stinks ._.

This level is just too big...

  Yeah.... -.-

XD Can't change it though, it looks AWESOME.

Thanks for deleting my score. I think this level is ready to be accepted. :D

  AK, it's not the stars that make it laggy, it's the way you filled the cave of the biggest moon, you used about 300 dots, and that's a lot.

  OK, removed a lot of stars, now only 200 or less is possible.

  Hey anybody, is it still too laggy? Or is it better now?

Also, now only 200 stars instead of 500. My score is impossible (for what I did), remove it please!

So actually, any score below 300 is possible, but because I didn't do the mini-mission, my score is now impossible.

  OK, removing the bubble makes the level 2X faster, but it also doesn't make it seem like space anymore...

So, should I add the bubble back on, or keep it off?

EDIT: I'm deleting some of the stars... there were 500 XD

That means lower scores, but it shouldn't be too much of a problem.

  Well, I remember JP saying not to judge a level by its lag, but it seems that this level is an exception... 0.0

Sadly, I also agree that this level's lag makes it a lot less fun...

OK, can I edit this? I didn't have much time to make the awesome BG I wanted to when the contest was on, but now that it's over, I want to make this level WAY more fun. :D

EDIT: Oh wait, it's Saturday... -.-

I won't be able to edit it today, but can you still make it editable? Thanks!

And thanks for being honest. I'm sorry I kinda spazzed out, but I worked a grand total of at least 50 hours on this level, 4X more than on AK's Games. So I was kinda upset that almost no one lliked it.

  what dingdong said, this is way to laggy for my taste if it were to not lag (I blame JP :P) then I would probably find it enjoyable, but the lag just makes it annoying. It's not the level, it's the lag.

  Well the problem is not the actual size, but the size you feel it has. The slow moving and similar BG makes it hard to find around, giving you a feeling that the level is much bigger.

So the problem is not the size, but the slow space movement, and that the most of the level looks like the same.

  Oh......

0.0

Well, is there anything else bad about this level?

  I tried...I really tried...It's just too large for me!

  I had 4 cans.
Then i fell of the board.

  Hmmmmm.....

"Quagmar Moons Mini"

I like the sound of that XD

EDIT: No one's beaten it.... No one has enough patience.... :(

EDIT:.....

5 minutes is all it took.....

It's really not as big as you think it is, I beat it with 45 jump....

  lolz
"Your spacesuit can last for 1 and 1/2 hours".

Ahh....well....I didn't plan on playing it that long....
:P

I'll give you 5/5 AK, and personally, Astria lags my computer more than this. O_o